1. I hope it's snows all day long tomorrow.

->I hope it will be snowing all day long tomorrow.

 2. I hope you can learn from the this experience.

->I hope you can learn from this experience.

3. I hope you can understand what I intended

->I hope you can understand what I am intended.

4. I hope you will make sure that you should hand in your work on time.

->I hope you will make sure that you should hand your work on time.

5. I hope I can give a ride with my colleague.

->I hope I can give a ride with my colleague.