Every place I put my heart is ruined.
-> Every place I put my heart is ruined.

Among those who with me, they all left with their parts are broken.
-> Among those who with me, they all left with their parts are broken.

This is the part in a poem by famous writer in korea.
-> These are some parts of a poem written by a famous writer in Korea.

As I get older, I loving the other agin makes me afraid.
-> As I get older, loving other person makes me afraid.

Actually, when I broke up last x-boy friend, I was never sad.
-> Actually, when I broke up with my last ex-boyfriend, I was never sad.

I don't know why.
-> I don't know why.

I think maybe I am getting familar with part.It is not first part.
-> I think maybe I am getting familiar with that part. It is not the first time.

Nowadys, I am watching a sitcom. Although it is funny, it includes love story.
-> Nowadays, I am watching a sitcom. Aside from being funny, it includes love story.

In that sitcom, the actor loves only the actress and never see other pretty girl.
-> In that sitcom, the actor's only love is the actress and he never looks at the other pretty girls.

Nowadays, there is that love?
-> Nowadays, where is that love?

Every place I loved is ruined, I didn't love anything.
-> Every place I loved is ruined, I didn't love anything.