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   ۼ   hyunmoo777       2012-04-12
   
 

Originally, I prefer short hair if you are a man. However, now i have a long hair but not straight. My girl constantly asked me to keep my hair not cut. Necessarily, I had to take her advice. That's why i have a long hair now. Long hair makes me really annoyed and seem to be shy or a girl !! So I cut my hair today as really short. After that, i sent her my picture that shows my short hair well. "Who are you?" sent me a message. Maybe, she was shocked at my hair because i unceremoniously cut my hair. But i don't care about how she acts. Now i feel so good haha

Originally, I prefer short hair if you are a man.

-> Originally, I prefer short hair for man.

However, now i have a long hair but not straight.

-> However, now I have a long hair, but it's not straight.

My girl constantly asked me to keep my hair not cut.

Necessarily, I had to take her advice.

-> Necessarily, I have to take her advice.

That's why i have a long hair now.

-> That's why I have a long hair now.

Long hair makes me really annoyed and seem to be shy or a girl!!

 -> Long hair makes me really feel annoyed and it seems to be shameful, and I feel like I Iook like a girl.

So I cut my hair today as really short.

-> So I cut my hair today really short.

After that, i sent her my picture that shows my short hair well. "Who are you?" sent me a message.

-> After that, I sent her my picture that shows my short hair. Then she sent a message saying, "Who are you?"

Maybe, she was shocked at my hair because i unceremoniously cut my hair. But i don't care about how she acts.

-> Maybe, she was shocked at my hair because I unceremoniously cut my hair.

 But i don't care about how she acts

-> But I don't care about how she acts.

Now i feel so good haha

->  Now I feel so good. Haha.

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