the difference of temperature of in door and out door is very great and serious.because people turn on

-> The difference of  the temperature indoor and outdoor have a very big difference and very serious. Because people turn on

the heater very high,that causes the pollution. maybe, it's good to wear more cloth than to keep the heater high degree.keeping high temperature

->the heater  in a very high temperature, that causes the pollution. Maybe, it's good to wear thick clothes  than to keep the heater in a  high degree. Keeping high temperature

in door makes air dry and stuffy, so we should maintain the optimal indoor temperature.and we need the humidifier,especially woman for skin

-> indoor makes air dry and stuffy, so we should maintain the optimal indoor temperature.and we need the humidifier,especially for the  woman skin

to keep moist.also,when using the humidifier,should change the filter frequently.if do not, it is harmful to bronchial tubes.

-> to keep moist. Also,when using the humidifier,should change the filter frequently. If  not, it is harmful to bronchial tubes

i love shopping.when bad things happen,after go to shopping, it makes me forget that.it's the joys of my life, and my clothes are my treasure no.1.

-> I love shopping. When bad things happen to me to relieve myself I will go shopping, It makes me forget that. It's the joys of my life, and my clothes are my no.1 treasure.

i love shoes and clothes,and i love to dress up myself.

-> I  love shoes and clothes,and I love to dress up myself.