About smoking problem

-> About smoking problem

nowadays, many teenager smoke.

-> Nowadays, many teenagers smoke.

Smoking is very bad for our health and It can

-> Smoking is very bad for our health and It really can

I will tell you the 2 reason for it.

-> I will tell you the 2 reasons for it.

First, teenagers think they are very nice while they
are smoking.

-> First, teenagers think they look very nice while they
are smoking.

second,girls of teenagers beleive smoking can lose
them weights.

-> Second,teenagers especially girls believe smoking can lose
them weights.

I think the smoke is kind of suicide.

-> I think the smoking is a kind of suicide.