MY DIARY 17/sep/2011

 I went to the school even today is saturday.

-> I went to the school even it's Saturday.

In the school, I played soccer for 2hours.

-> I played soccer for two hours in the school.

So,I am so tired today.

-> So, I am so tired today.

I ate dinner with my family and my father's family.

-> I ate dinner together with my family and my father's family as well.

  It was very good.Today is a very great day.