Dear teacher!

It's first time to wrie you this e-mail.

=> It's my first time to write you this email.

Actually, writting is easier than speaking. As you know that it's ease to erase for my mistake.

=> Actually, writing is more easy than speaking, as you know that it's easy to erase any mistakes.

I know that my skill for speaking and grammer is too uninfluently.

=> I know that my speaking skills and grammar are not good.

So I need your advise more and more . I need more time to speak someone. So if you had a time for me I just want to talk more. Could you find this ways to do with you more.

=> So I need your advise more, I need to have much time to talk with someone, so if you have time I want to talk to you more,  Can you find ways to work with you more?

Anyway It's good time to talk with you. I hope to make good relationship with you.

=> Anyway I really had a good time talking to you. I hope I can have a good relatonship with you.

Have a nice day! My teacher!