The best place for summer activity

--> The Best Place To Enjoy Summer

If you are going to enjoy summer vacation, I will recomend the place"Haeunda".

--> If you are going to enjoy your summer vacation, I will recommend "Haeunda Beach".

Haeundae is locate in Busan Korea.

-->It is located in Busan, Korea.

It is kind of beach.

---> It is a kind of a beach.

I guess It is best place for summer activity place.Because the Haeundae's water is more clean than another beach. And it is more safe than another beach too.

--> I guess, it is the best place to enjoy summer because Haeundae's sea water is more clean and more safe than any other beaches.

In front of Haeundae, It has the big hotel. It also have many good restaurant. But the bad thing is It always have a lot of Korean or foreigner.

--> In front of Haeundae's beach there is a big hotel and it has a lot of good restaurants but the bad thing is, there are lots of  Koreans and foreigners.

So If you go to Haeundae you will feel so exciting. But you can feel little bit unconfortable. I think Haeundae is best place for summer activity.

-->So, if you go to Haeundae it makes you feel exciting and little bit uncomfortable. I think Haeundae is the best place to enjoy summer.